Need Brick help on pLant room back ground

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Need Brick help on pLant room back ground

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I need some help with the side walls. Do they look right. Do they need to be angled a bit. I'm having a hard time with this.


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Are you going to raise this question every time you draw a new background? ;)
As you already pointed out (more or less), the bricks need to be angled, I recommend using a vanishing point to make sure of the correctness of the room's perspective.
Btb, you should consider reworking the plants, for they look very inconsistent - I can see at least 3 different styles of drawing.
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I really wonder...
  • if this is supposed to be room IN a house or outside :?:
    if it is clever to hide a window behind a huge plant
    if (assuming this is an inside scene) bricks on the walls are realistic. What about finery and wallpapers? Furthermore the lighting of the bricks seems to come from a magical lamp in the floor.
    if (assuming it is an outside scene) that lighting cunstruction is something you would expect outside.
The bricks need perspective correction just as in any other screen. Some shading would be nice or even necessary because of the spotlight lighting.
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The bricks need definetly a perspective correction like the others already mentioned.
Try to set outlines on all the plants or draw them all without outlines.
It will look much better without difeferent styles.
By the way: questions like this are supposed to be asked here:
http://www.adventure-treff.de/forum/vie ... php?t=8076

If you add some more details and fix the perspective and the plants this could be a nice background.
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Thank you for the ideas. I'm working on the background now. It will be done soon.


Its a inside background
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As it was said, there is a special topic for specific questions like this. Also you have the possibility to bother the MMM people, as you already do. ;) Thus there is no need for this topic and additionally you got some hints, so it's probably ok for you that I locked the topic.
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